Juliet
Bullying at school Hello. I wrote an entry about school bullying because I thought it is a highly-importnat topic and I'd very much like to receive your opinions on it. Also, if I made any mistakes, I'd be thankful if you could correct me. Thank you all in advance. My entry: I believe that the rules that exist in schools nowadays aren't enough and that some more should be invented in order to control violence in schools. For instance, let's take a look at bullying. Currently, almost every student would admit that they've experienced at least one incident of buylling. Buylling has almost always been around, but today with all the social websites, such as Facebook, Twitter and so on, it seems as if bullying is an easy thing to do, in order to get social acceptance, popularity and control. In my opinion, the system doesn't seem to do enough to stop this issue. Kids are afraid to go to school, to talk and apply for help. In conclusion there are more actions that need to be done in order to end the violence, once and for all.
Dec 27, 2014 3:57 PM
Corrections · 4
Bullying today often refers to the solely pshological. In my day, half a century ago, it was physical cruelty whcih was inflicted by other boys and then there was corporal punishment. The psychological impact of such treatment was rarely considered. It was all part of 'making a man out of you'.
December 28, 2014
I was thinking this time I was going to have no mistakes, sadly I was wrong. Thank you for correcting me.
December 28, 2014
"nowadays are not effective." " and that more rules should be created/should be implemented" "social media sites" "seems as though it is easier for bullies to gain popularity, social acceptance and control of their victims using social media websites" "and ask for help " "there should be more action taken to stop the violence once and for all"
December 28, 2014
nowadays are not effective. and that more rules should be created/should be implemented social media sites it seems as though it is easier for bullies to gain popularity, social acceptance and control of their victims using social media websites and ask for help there should be more action taken to end the violence once and for all
December 28, 2014
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