The winter holiday is comimg in advance.

After some days of lacking of water in our school, there comes a news. We should will finish the term in advance because the water can't supply about six thousands of students. Just now we got the news. We feel are excited. you know the Life with no water is tough. We don't can't have showering keeping somedays already. If it is happens in summer, there is a terrible smell must come out, lol. Now all students pack up their clothes, preparing to go home. There is no doult the traffic will be a disaster right now! Not many of the six thousands of students take so small quantity of the bus. You can imagine how crowed it will be!

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The winter holiday is comimg in advance

After some days lack of without water in our school, there comes a the news, that we should will finish the term in advance early, because the water can't supply about six thousands of students ("because there isn't enough water for six thousand students"). Just now we got the news, and we feel excited. You know the life no without water is tough, some days there isn't enough for us to take a shower. we don't have showering keeping somedays already, if it is happend If this had happened in summer, there would be a terrible smell must come out, lol. Now all students are packing up their clothes and preparing to go home, so there is no doult doubt the traffic will be a disaster right now! There are not nearly enough buses for all six thousands of students take so small quantity of bus, so you can imagine how crowded it will be!

你快要放两个月假吗？好幸运！