Samuel
Introduction こんにちわ!僕の名前はサムエールですと16歳。
Dec 29, 2014 3:14 PM
Corrections · 4
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Introduction

こんにち!僕の名前はサムエールです16歳です

 

※Fer -san and Ryoko-san are right. 

※The hiragana of "wa" in"konnchiwa" is "は". Even though the pronunciation changed, we still the traditional hiragana to understand it a particle as the same as "へ" and "を".

※"と"

December 30, 2014

Introduction

 

こんにち!僕の名前はサムエールです16歳です

 

※Fer -san and Ryoko-san are right.

※The hiragana of "wa" in"konnchiwa" is "は". Even though the pronunciation changed, we still the traditional hiragana to understand it a particle as the same as "へ" and "を".

※"と" is used between nouns. "And" in the begining of a sentence is "そして". But "僕(の名前)はサムエールです。そして16歳です。" is a little strange.

December 30, 2014
Fer's corrections are very good, and you can also say こんにちは!僕はサムエールです。16歳です。
December 30, 2014
I'm not a native Japanese speaker, but let me give it a try: こんにちは! 僕はサムエールで、16歳です。
December 29, 2014
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