Yamilka Semerel
A little descripcion of my family I have a small family, only four members. My mother, My stepfather, my younger brother and me. My mother was a police officer, now she is pensioner, she's fifty years old. My stepfather is a truck driver, he's fifty-five years old. My younger brother isn't nothing ( A vague) He's twenty-two years old and finally I. Well I'm the best of my family Why? Because I who is writing. XDD I'm a secretary and I'm twenty-six years old.
Jan 14, 2015 3:23 PM
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A little description of my family

I have a small family, only four members. My family consists of my mother, my stepfather, my younger brother, and me.  My mother, who is fifty years old was a police officer, but now she is retired.  My stepfather is a truck driver.  He's fifty-five years old.  My younger brother doesn't work.  He's twenty-two years old.   Now about me, well I'm the best of my family.   Why?   Because I am the one who is writing this. XDD  I'm a secretary, and I'm twenty-six years old.

January 14, 2015

A little descripcion of my family

I have a small family, only four members. My mother, My stepfather, my younger brother and me. My mother was a police officer, now she is pensioner. She's fifty years old. My stepfather is a truck driver. He's fifty-five years old. My younger brother isn't anything ( A vague???) He's twenty-two years old. Finally myself. Well, I am the best of my family. Why? Because I a. The one who is writing. XDD I'm a secretary and I'm twenty-six years old.

 

 

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January 30, 2015
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