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由西安嘅明信片 你好!你最近點呀?我而家喺西安旅行,五日留。呢個城市好靚啊!有好多古嘅樓,我好有興趣。因為個城牆仲完全,就可以前後行上牆嘅路。我嗰度行路嘅時候日落然後城牆嘅燈籠同埋古嘅樓嘅照明開咗,好彩啊!要六個點鐘就到開始嘅地點。我昨日十八公里咁上下行咗路,尋晚好攰啦!我今日去睇兵馬俑。我係小朋友自從我要見倒兵馬俑所以我好活躍。雖然我聽過好好景象但係我仲咁驚奇我冇言可對。咁多兵窩!試想大多仲地下啦!我都好玩喺西安食嘢。中國嘅北方菜同香港菜好唔同嘅。我已經試過三種我以前冇食過嘅麵,我都食過啲有名食品比如泡饃,杮子餅同肉夾饃(我嘅最中意)。個個都係好好味。西安同陝西菜都幾辣 - 好彩我好中意辣菜。唔好意思呢張明相片遲到,我呢度太忙唔可以早啲寫嘢。我要走嘞因為明朝要好早起床去機場搭飛機翻屋企。好慘啊啊啊!我想留嘅啦!
Jan 16, 2015 12:26 PM
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西安嘅明信片

你好!你最近點呀?我而家喺西安旅行,逗留五日。呢個城市好靚啊!有好多古樓,我好有興趣。因為個城牆仲係好完整完全所以可以前後行上牆嘅路。我嗰度一路路嘅時候日落城牆嘅燈籠同埋古樓嘅照明開咗,真係好彩啊!要六個到開始嘅地點。我行咗十八公里咁上下行咗路,所以尋晚好攰啦!我今日去睇兵馬俑。我係小朋友自從我要既時候見倒兵馬俑所以我已經好活躍/興奮。雖然我聽過好好景象多相關既事蹟但係我仲咁驚奇我冇言可對另我無話可說。咁多兵喎!試想大多仲有好多埋係地下!我都好鍾意喺西安食嘢。中國嘅北方菜同香港菜好唔同嘅。我已經試過三種我以前冇食過嘅麵,我都食過啲有名食品比如泡饃,杮子餅同肉夾饃(最中意)。個個樣樣好好味。西安同陝西菜都幾辣 - 好彩我好中意辣菜。唔好意思呢張明信片遲到,我呢度太忙唔可以早啲抽時間寫嘢。我要走嘞因為明朝聽朝要好早起床去機場搭飛機屋企。好慘啊啊啊!我想留耐啲呀嘅啦

January 17, 2015
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你好!你最近點呀?我而家喺西安旅行,逗留五日。呢個城市好靚啊!有好多古樓,我好有興趣。因為個城牆仲完整所以就可以前後行上嘅路。我嗰度行路嘅時候日落然後城牆嘅燈籠同埋古樓嘅照明開咗,好(don't know what you mean)啊!要六個到開始嘅地點。我行咗十八公里咁上下行咗路,尋晚好攰啦!我今日去睇兵馬俑。我係小朋友,所以我一見到自從我要見倒兵馬俑所以就好活躍。雖然我聽過好好景象(did you mean 好恐怖景象)但係我仲咁驚我冇言可對。咁多兵!試想大多仲地下啦!我覺得最好玩西安食嘢。中國嘅北方菜同香港菜好唔同。我已經試過三種以前冇食過嘅麵,我都食過啲有名食品比如泡饃,杮子餅同肉夾饃(我最中意)。個個都係好好味。西安同陝西菜都幾辣 - 好彩我好中意辣菜。唔好意思呢張明片遲到,我呢度太忙唔可以早啲寫嘢。我要走嘞因為朝要好早起床去機場搭飛機翻屋企。好慘啊啊啊!我想留低呀嘅啦!?

 

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January 16, 2015
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你好!你最近點呀?我而家喺西安旅行,留五日。呢個城市好靚啊!有好多古樓,我好有興趣。因為個城牆仲完整,還有路行上牆。我行到日落,然後城牆嘅燈籠同埋古樓嘅照明就開咗,好彩啊!要六點鐘就到開始嘅地點。我昨日行咗十八公里咁上下,已經好攰啦!我今日去睇兵馬俑。我係小朋友自從我見到兵馬俑就好活躍。雖然我見過好多景象但係我仲係覺得好驚奇,令我冇言可對。咁多兵窩!大多仲係地下!我有喺西安食嘢。中國嘅北方菜同香港菜好唔同。我已經試過三種我未食過嘅麵,我都食過出名嘅食品比如泡饃,杮子餅同肉夾饃(我最中意)。個個都好好味。西安同陝西菜都幾辣 - 好彩我好中意辣。唔好意思呢張明相片遲到,我呢度太忙唔可以早啲寫。我要走啦因為聽朝要好早起身去機場搭飛機翻屋企。好慘啊啊啊!我想留係度呀!

January 17, 2015
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