Alex
Fictional story All my suspicions(doubts) come true. Soon after the robbery suspects were detained(arrested) and they were carried (brought) to (the) prison. In the wake (as a result) of their robbery 10 people were harmed(injured) and two killed. One of the deceased was slaughtered brutally. The criminals bought their guns from Bolivian smuggler. Ernesto have fruitfully dealt with X special forces for a long time. Their relation originate(started/began) from the first X war when chaps like Ernesto was in great demand. As time goes on he persuaded(make everybody sure) everybody in his loyalty and show all his professional skills as a smuggler. Ernesto was an ordinary guy who did not differ(vary) from his peers. But as a Bolivian guy he was very restless and wanted to find his way of life.
Jan 25, 2015 8:33 AM
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Fictional story

All my suspicions(doubts) come true. Soon after the robbery suspects were detained(arrested) and they were carried (brought) to (the) prison. In the wake (as a result) of their robbery 10 people were harmed(injured) and two killed. One of the deceased was slaughtered brutally. The criminals bought their guns from a Bolivian smuggler. Ernesto had fruitfully dealt with X special forces for a long time. Their relation originated (started/began) from the first X war when chaps like Ernesto were in great demand. As time went on he persuaded(made everybody sure) everybody of his loyalty and showed all his professional skills as a smuggler. Ernesto was an ordinary guy who did not differ(vary) from his peers, but as a Bolivian guy he was very restless and wanted to find his way in life.

January 25, 2015
No, I just try to make up some short story
January 25, 2015
Is that a plot or something for one of the episode of crime/action TV Series.
January 25, 2015
Please, correct my entry.
January 25, 2015
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