Charlotte
I lost it again! I am a college student and now enjoying my vacation home. I have been looking for a high-paid part-time job recently.However,to my great disapointment,i was told that it's too late to offer me a job because the vacation began several weeks ago and there's no part-time job left.I lost my opportunity again!Yes,again,the same with last year!I should have started earlier,however, i was addicted to parties with my old friends!Should i attribute it to my laziness?
Jan 25, 2015 3:08 PM
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I lost it again!

I am a college student and I am now enjoying my vacation at home. I have been looking for a high-paying part-time job recently. However, to my great disapointment, was told that it's too late to find a job because the vacation began several weeks ago and there are no part-time jobs left. I lost my opportunity again !Yes, again, the same as last year! I should have started earlier, however, I was addicted to parties with my old friends! Should I attribute it to my laziness?

 

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January 25, 2015
There is a lot of competition in China, I suggest you get some job experience that may help you in the future.
January 26, 2015
Yeah.
January 25, 2015
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