diemmy1994
when you are older, your dream become smaller As I was a child of 7 years old, I had wished that I would be a president, as a president, I could bring the peace and happiness for all people. when I became to be older, I had wanted to be a CEO of an multinational company, I could lead my company to be the most powerful company ever, when I was in high school, I hoped I would be a successful person, I could take care of my family and support them anything they ask for. And the time pass by steadily until a day I realize how hard life was. And now, I just want to have a good job, I am very scare of job-less. people says : when you are older, your dream is smaller. Today I went to tour les jour restaurant for an appointment. a friend of mine invite me to join a team to do charity. It would be a big campaign charity with variety of activities and we must hold a lot of events and competition. because I had no experience on making event and I thought that is a real chance for me to learn something about that, so I decided to take part in to. My friend said that, you would be one of ten person, whose will form a team, which were called core team for this campaign. I replied : wow! that is amazing! although I did not know what I could contribute for them. Then, my friend introduce me to the others , I knew some of them before, then they asked me to introduced my self. I did it obediently, then they gave me some questions, What do you want to do in the future? what are your favorite? what do you specialize about? bla..bla...bla... oh my god, I did not know, but to save my face, I tried to said a lie...then it was their, one by one....they answered clealy and very specific, I could not believe due to some foolish face like that , all of them are have their own plan and they know what they wanted to and how to get it, I look back ward my self...it was terrible...so disappointed about my self... I am living like a tree, no plan, no work hard, everything around me is zero... how do I improve my self?
Jan 25, 2015 4:10 PM
Corrections · 2
1

when you are older, your dream<em>s</em> become smaller.

As I a child of 7 years old, I wished that I would <em>become</em> president. <em>As</em> president, I could bring <em>about</em> peace and happiness for all people. <em>As I grew</em> older, I wanted to <em>become</em> a CEO of an multinational company <em>and </em>lead my company to be the most powerful company ever. When I was in high school, I hoped I would be a successful person: I could take care of my family and support them <em>in any way they need</em>. <em>Time passed steadily</em> until <em>the day came that </em>I realize<em>d</em> how hard life <em>is</em>. <em>Now</em> I just want to have a good job <em>and</em> I am very scare<em>d</em> of <em>being</em> jobless. <em>P</em>eople say : <em>As you get </em>older, your dream<em>s</em> <em>get</em> smaller. Today I went to tour les jour restaurant for an appointment. <em>A </em>friend of mine invite<em>d</em> me to join a <em>charity team</em>. <em>There </em><em>would</em> be a big <em>charity campaign</em> with variety of activities and we <em>would have to orchestrate</em> a lot of events and competition<em>s</em>. <em>B</em>ecause I had no experience <em>putting</em> event<em>s together, </em>I thought that <em>this could be</em> real chance for me to learn something about that. <em>Thus </em>I decided to <em>take part</em>. My friend said that you would <em>join a group of</em> ten <em>people</em>, <em>who would</em> form a team. <em>These </em>were called <em>the</em> core team<em>s</em> <em>of </em><em>the</em> campaign. I replied <em>"W</em>ow! That is amazing!<em>",</em> although I did not know <em>yet how I could contribute</em>. Then my friend introduce me to the others. I knew some of them <em>from</em> before. <em>T</em>hey asked me to introduce myself, <em>and </em>I did <em>this </em>obediently. then they <em>asked</em> me some questions, <em>like "</em>What do you want to do in the future?<em>", </em>"What are your favorite<em>[?]</em>?<em>", </em><em>"W</em>hat do you specialize <em>in</em>?" bla..bla...bla... <em>O</em>h my god, I <em>couldn't think of</em> <em>any</em><em> answers</em>, but to save my face, I tried to <em>say</em> a lie [<em>or simply: I lied. or maybe: I lied my way through it]</em>... <em>T</em>hen it was their <em>turn</em>, one by one.... <em>T</em>hey answered <em>clearly</em> and very specific<em>ally. </em>I could not believe due to some foolish face like that <em>[meaning unclear]</em>, all of them  have their own plan and they know what they want to and how to get it, I look <em>back </em><em>at</em> myself... <em>I</em>t was terrible... <em>I felt so</em> disappointed <em>with</em> myself...
I am living like a tree. <em>N</em>o plan. <em>N</em>o work hard. <em>E</em>verything around me is zero... how do I improve my <em>situation?</em>

January 25, 2015
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!