liudmila
Little note on english.First try. Hi,everybody.Well, do u know what happened with economy in russia (or russian economy?)?i will tell u, financial meltdown, but big (move?) part of russian people don't understand.They believe, that after few years,russia will be strong country,eternal illusion.This country is lagging behind for decades.This country can't make good chair, actually in this country made nothing, only oil and metals.Russia with nuclear bomb(it may not even fly) believers citizens, and dangerous idiots with power.This country remind me poor country like irak,veezuela,but not so bad, not now, after 5-6 month it will be more close...
Jan 25, 2015 6:27 PM
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Hi Lyudmila! I will correct your entry sentence by sentence. :) 

 

Y = you wrote

C = corrected version

 

Y: Well, do u know what happened with economy in russia (or russian economy?)

C: Well, do you know what happened with the Russian economy? (Don't forget your article 'the'!) 

 

Y: i will tell u, financial meltdown, but big (move?) part of russian people don't understand.

C: I will tell you - a financial meltdown, but a large percentage of the Russian people don't understand this. 

 

Y: They believe, that after few years,russia will be strong country,eternal illusion.

C: They believe, that after a few years, Russia will be a strong country. This is an eternal illusion. 

 

Y: This country is lagging behind for decades.

C: This country has been lagging behind for decades. 

 

Y: This country can't make good chair, actually in this country made nothing, only oil and metals

C: This country can't make good chairs. Actually, in this country, nothing is made. There is only oil and metals. 

 

Y: Russia with nuclear bomb(it may not even fly) believers citizens, and dangerous idiots with power.

C: Russia, with its nuclear bomb, which may not even fly, is full of naive citizens and dangerous idiots with power. 

 

Y: This country remind me poor country like irak,veezuela,but not so bad, not now, after 5-6 month it will be more close...

C: This country reminds me of poor countries like Iraq, Venezuela, but it's not so bad right now. After another 5 - 6 months, it will be closer. 

 

Wow! You are very hard on Russia! Personally, I love Russia, but I respect your opinion! I hope the economy there gets better soon. ;) 

 

 

January 26, 2015
You are wrong woman, and don't mislead peoples from other countries.
January 25, 2015
You are very right but it seems it is a part of Russians mentality :(
January 25, 2015
It's sad that people in this country still trust "dangerous idiots with power." :(
January 25, 2015
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