Homework
Hi, everybody! I have to do my homework for tomorrow, so I think it's a good idea sharing my writing with other partners who can help me to improve it. I'm going to describe you the topic to you... My best friend, Angela, is looking for an au pair to look after her children, in Spain, and she asked me if I could recommend somebody. Here is my answer:
Hi, Angela:
Nice to hearing from you!
(Nice to hear from you / Nice hearing from you).
I think I know the perfect person. Recently, I have met Leigh, an interesting Irish guy. He's 33 and he's a primary school teacher, so he has a lot of experience with children. He also gets on well with his sister, so it seems they are a close family.
Leigh is helping me to improve my English speaking and he always looks patient (he has to wait for me for a few minutes until I finish every sentence ;)), kind and helpful (He often writes me a few examples when I don't understand him). He is a punctual and responsible person too. Moreover, he's learning Spanish, and he speaks very fluently. Your children will understand him very well. They might even learn English!
In his free time he likes playing the piano. He's a sensitive person. He also enjoys going abroad. He has been in Spain twice and He knows Seville. He usually travels on his own. He's very independent. He told me that he was thinking about working in a British school in Spain.
For all of the above reasons, I think that he could be a great choice. If you are interested, I can give you his email address.
See you soon.
Antonio.
Wow! A great piece of writing! I am very impressed! Just a few small details to check. If you have any doubts or questions, just let me know! Well done!
Who is this 'Leigh' guy....he sounds fantastic! :D hahahahah
Homework
Hi, everybody! I have to do my homework for tomorrow, so I think it's a good idea sharing my writing with other partners who can help me to improve it. I'm going to describe you the topic... My best friend, Angela, is looking for an au pair to look after her children, in Spain, and she asked me if I could recomend somebody. Here is my answer:
Hi, Angela:
Nice to hearing from you! I think I know the perfect person. Recently, I have met Leigh, an interesting Irish guy. He's 33 and he's a teacher <em>at a</em> primary school, so he has a lot of experience with children. He also get<em>s</em> on well with his sister, so it seems they are a close family.
Leigh is helping me improve my English speaking and he <em>is</em> always patient <em>with me</em> (he have to wait for me during minutes until I finish every sentence ;)), kind<em>,</em> an<em>d</em> helpful (He often <em>writes down a couple examples for me </em>when I don't understand him*). He is a punctual and responsible person too. Moreover, he's learning Spanish, and he speaks very fluent<em>ly</em>. Your children <em>won't have trouble understanding him</em>. They might even learn <em>some</em> English!
In his free time Leigh likes playing the piano. He's a sensitive person. He also enjoys <em>traveling</em> abroad. He has been in Spain twice and He <em>is familiar with</em> Seville. He usually travels on his own. He's very independent. He told me that he was thinking about working in a British school in Spain.
For all the above reasons, I think that he could be a great choice. If you are interested, I can give you his email adress.
See you soon.
Antonio.
* Do you mean that he writes down what he is saying, when you don't understand it, or that he provides examples of how a word or phrase is used?
