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Al Rosh Ha'giva (practice) Shalom! Ani levad. Ani hiskhiv la'tzipurim al rosh ha'giva karov ha'bayit sheli. Ani ohev li'shtot ktzat mayim, matay ani po. Hayom so-er meod ve-gam et ha'shimshi. Ze mezeg avir azar ani l'khshov ve'likhtov. Ha'kelev sheli ratz im et ha'mishpachah sheli. sorry that it's a little short!
Jan 25, 2015 11:58 PM
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Al Rosh Ha'giva (practice)

Shalom! Ani levad. Ani hiskhiv makshiv la'tzipuorim al rosh ha'giva karov ha'la'bayit sheli. Ani ohev li'shtot ktzat mayim, matay ka'asher \kshe'ani po. Hayom so-er meod ve-gam et ha'shimshi (bahir would be more correct in Hebrew than "Shimshi"). Ze mezeg avir azar ani she'ozer li l'khshov ve'likhtov. Ha'kelev sheli ratz im et ha'mishpachah sheli.

sorry that it's a little short!

 

Hi, I don't know if you can read Hebrew letters, but writing it in Hebrew down here, just in case:

 

על ראש הגבעה (תרגיל)

 

שלום! אני לבד. אני מקשיב לציפורים על ראש הגבעה, קרוב לבית שלי. אני אוהב לשתות קצת מים (כאשר/)כשאני פה. היום סוער מאד וגם בהיר. זה מזג אוויר שעוזר לי לחשוב ולכתוב. הכלב שלי רץ עם המשפחה שלי.

 

Comments:

Karov\ Rahok (close to, far from): Karov le-, Karov la-, Karov el (and not Karov Ha'...); Rahok Me-

 

Matay is a question word used only solely in questions. You basically can say "Matay she'haiti sham", but would rather say "Kshe", which is short for "Ka'asher" (At the time of...)

 

Well written, even if it was slightly challenging to read Hebrew in English :)

 

 

January 26, 2015
My pleasure! Keep on writing! :)
January 26, 2015
Thank you very much and I can read Hebrew letters (thankfully) :) I am grateful for the comment.
January 26, 2015
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