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My city and my ideal holidays I grew up in Palma del Rio, a town near Cordoba, located in the Guadalquivir river's valley, in the south of Spain. It's bordered by 2 rivers and many areas of fertile farmland. The weather here is cold in winter and very hot in summer. The temperature in July and August is extreme. Sometimes, it can reach 40ºC or more. I like winter here because t's drier than in the seaside, however I prefer summer there. In fact, I usually spend my summer holidays in Cádiz, another city from Andalucia, I like its beaches and its mild climate, although, sometimes it's very windy. I don't like these days. However, my ideal holidays would be to go to New York, San Francisco or Tokyo. I love the contemporary architecture and I think that the skycrapers should be amazing. I like the nature too. I've been in many natural sites in Europe and Australia such us Loch Ness in England, the Cliffs of Moher in Ireland or Sydney Harbour National Park. I love all of them, but, I prefer cities, cultural tourism and urban life. In my opinion it's more interesting and enriching.
Jan 26, 2015 11:36 AM
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My city and my ideal holidays

I grew up in Palma del Rio, a town near Cordoba, located in the Guadalquivir river's valley, in the south of Spain. It's bordered by 2 rivers and many areas of fertile farmland. The weather here is cold in winter and very hot in summer. The temperature in July and August is extreme. Sometimes, it can reach 40ºC or more. I like winter here because it's drier than in at the seaside, however I prefer summer there. In fact, I usually spend my summer holidays in Cádiz, another city from Andalucia, I like its beaches and its mild climate, although, sometimes it's very windy. I don't like those days.
However, my ideal holidays would be to go to New York, San Francisco or Tokyo. I love the contemporary architecture and I think that the skycrapers should would be amazing. I like the nature too. I've been in many natural sites in Europe and Australia such us Loch Ness in England Scotland, the Cliffs of Moher in Ireland or Sydney Harbour National Park. I love all of them, but, I prefer cities, cultural tourism and urban life. In my opinion it's more interesting and enriching.

 

Very well written, only a few minor errors (and a geographical correction!)

January 27, 2015
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