Giulip
Does this sentence sound correct? It's so stupid when specialized schools discourage so much somebody by ending with making him/her hate what s/he's supposed to love.
Jan 26, 2015 1:19 PM
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Does this sentence sound correct?

It's so stupid when specialized schools discourage so much somebody by ending with making him/her hate what s/he's supposed to love.

 


It's so stupid when specialized schools discourage somebody so much, resulting  in making him/her hate what s/he's supposed to love.

January 27, 2015

Does this sentence sound correct?

It's so stupid when specialized schools discourage so much somebody by ending with making him/her hate what s/he's supposed to love.


It is so stupid when specialised <em>(specialized = American, so not incorrect)</em> discourage somebody so much by making them hate what they are supposed to love.

 

<em>I don't like this sentence though, it feels a little disjointed. Perhaps - "It isn't good that specialised schools discourage people from learning/studying, by making them hate what they love". </em>

<em>What do you mean by specialised schools?</em>

November 15, 2015

Does this sentence sound correct?

It's so stupid when specialised schools discourage somebody so much that, in the end, it makes them hate something that they loved previously.

November 11, 2015

Does this sentence sound correct?

It's so stupid when specialized schools discourage somebody so much that they end up making him/her hate what s/he's supposed to love.

 

Correction notes: Very good! Just needed to rearrange a few words!

January 26, 2015
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