Myriam
A new week Today it starts a new week. Last friday I couldn't write in my DIARIO. I couldn't write it in the morning and in the afternoon my son and my daughter didn't go to school so I was a little bit difficult for me to find time for writing. Today it is monday and on monday morning I go to my son and daughter school's library. Another women and me are helping to the school to have a tidy library. When we are there we cover the new books and we change the old and broken cover of the old books. We also registered the books and the school can know what books are borrowed and what books are in the library. The work in the library with the other women are pleasing. This week is PEACE WEEK and we choose all the book that say something about the peace and we put them on the table for the students, so they can read it if they want to. We also draw a a doves, we cut them and we hung in the ceiling. This week the library is nice.
Jan 26, 2015 2:58 PM
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A New Week

Today starts a new week. Last Friday morning I couldn't write in my notebook [diary]I couldn't write in it in the afternoon either, because my son and daughter didn't go to school. It was difficult for me to find time to write.

Today is Monday, and Monday mornings I go to my son's and daughter's school library. I am helping the school have a tidy library with another woman. When we are there we put covers on the new books, and change any damaged covers on the other books. We also register the books so the school can know which books are borrowed and which books are in the library. Working in the library with the other women is nice.

This week is "Peace Week," so we chose books about peace and placed them on a table for the students to read if they want to. We also drew doves, cut them out, and hung them from the ceiling. The library is nice to be in this week. 

Myriam:
Good writing. Remember to use commas as needed. When the main clause changes, you may start a new sentence. Days of the week are proper nouns, and capitalized.  Titles are generally placed in quotations. The tense of final paragraph should be future, but I used past tense. To change the verbs to the future tense: "we will choose . . . and place. . . " " . . . will draw . . . and hang them . . . "  " . . . will be nice this week." 

January 26, 2015
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