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Traveling Traveling is one of the best ways to spend your free time. Each time a person goes somewhere new she learns more about the world and people. I totally agree with the saying that traveling broadens our minds. It's even more enjoyable to have a travel companion who shares the same interests and is willing to go everywhere with you!
Jan 26, 2015 7:07 PM
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Traveling

Traveling is one of the best ways to spend your free time. Each time a person goes somewhere new they learn more about the world and people. I totally agree with the saying that traveling broadens our minds. It's even more enjoyable to have a travel companion who shares the same interests and is willing to go everywhere with you!

 

<em>Great entry. It is completely ok to use "she learns..." or "he learns..." in this situation. But being that you are talking in general and not specifying male or female by saying "...a person...", using 'they learn' is a good alternative in keeping it general. </em>

January 26, 2015
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