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26 January 15 From now on, I started to write diary to improve my English writing skills. Today, I was a little tired because I had to write my essay for difficult subject. After I wrote my essay, I started to regret. ‘What if I started to write my essay ealier…’ I decided to keep in mind that I have to be strict to myself to control myself …Anyway, it is very hard to speak and write English. However, I believe myself !!!
Jan 26, 2015 9:41 PM
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26 January 15

From now on, I started to will write diary to improve my English writing skills.<em> (Because it is from 'now' and 'on' - present to future I would say ...I will write a diary...or I am beginning to write a diary. )</em>

Today, I was a little tired because I had to write my essay for <em>on a </em>difficult subject. After I wrote my essay, I started to regret. (<em> with 'regret, there must be something to regret, so maybe 'I started to regret that I had not begun it earlier, or 'I started to regret how I used my time', or something like this. </em>‘What if I started to write my essay ealier…’ I decided to keep in mind that I have to be strict  to with myself to control myself …Anyway, it is very hard to speak and write English. However, I believe myself !!!

<em>Yes, you can write very well. Well done. </em>

 

January 26, 2015
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