My school
My name is Emma, i am a college student，my major is music.  I am in fourth grade this year,my major is a total of five years.My school in Tianjin . Tianjin have a lot of Italy building，the building is very beautiful. I love this city because there are very clean. People who lives Tianjin are very  kind . Tianjin people are very kind.(←These sentences are what difference does it make？）When i was twelve ，our school has arranged for our English class. But i dont like study English . now , i am a college student , i  am  very regret .  i have to  study English for the postgraduate examination. My sister  tell me :" "italki" can help you . " Then I registered this website. Though I am totally clueless，but I have the determination to  learn it well.I hope you can help me~！ （TAT 我只会写这么多啦~ 会不会笑话我）

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My school
My name is Emma, I am a college student, and my major is music. My major is a total of five years and I am in fourth grade this year. My school is in Tianjin, which has a lot of Italian&nbsp;buildings，and are &nbsp;very beautiful. I love this city because it is very clean. People who lives&nbsp;in Tianjin are very kind. Tianjin people are very kind. (&larr;Both of these sentences mean the same thing, they are just different ways of writing them）When i was twelve our school taught English classes. But I didn't like studying English. Now I am a college student and I am&nbsp;regret it. I have to study English for the postgraduate examination and my sister told me, " "italki" can help you. " Then I registered on this website. Though I am totally clueless, but I have the determination to learn it well. I hope you can help me~！ （TAT 我只会写这么多啦~ 会不会笑话我）