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ABOUT MYSELF hi guys, my name is Tanya, I am from Russia, learning English and I want to know this language perfectly
Jan 27, 2015 6:53 PM
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ABOUT MYSELF

Hi guys, my name is Tanya, I am from Russia, I am learning English and I want to know this language perfectly

November 8, 2015

ABOUT MYSELF

hi guys, my name is Tanya, I am from Russia, and I am learning English and I want to know this language perfectly

January 29, 2015
hi. i am fine)
January 29, 2015

Corrections in red.  Stylistic suggestion in blue.

 

You used the right words, but you wrote one <em>looooooong</em> sentence which needs to be divided and punctuated.  Here are a few possible ways:

 

Hi, guys.  My name is Tanya.  I am from Russia, and I am learning English.  I want to know this language perfectly.

 

Hi, guys, my name is Tanya.  I am from Russia, am learning English, and I want to know this language perfectly.

 

Higuysmy name is Tanya.  I am from Russia.  I am learning English, and I want to know this language perfectly.  

 

Because you start very informally ("Hi, guys"), it would be better to continue writing informally by using contractions.  That is, you could say, "My name's Tanya," "I'm from Russia," and "I'm learning English."

 

 

January 28, 2015
Hi, Tanya, how r u?))))
January 27, 2015
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