nur uveyik
MY DREAM I found you in the end I reach to your body that in my dream status A letter from you nestle on my lips that night That a letter is sileced quielty that my dreams A huge crossword fall into secretly from your lips I approach to your breath bit by bit in order to kill me I said come on unite into my body You are authorized tonight Nur Üveyik They are my lyrics I hope that you will fix. =))
Jan 28, 2015 6:12 AM
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MY DREAM

I found you in the end
I reach to your body that in my dream status
A letter from you nestled on my lips that night
That a letter is sileced slotted quielty silently into that my dreams
A huge crossword falls into secretly from your lips
I approach to your breath bit by bit in order to kill me [kill?]
I said come on and unite into my body
You are authorised tonight

Nur Üveyik


They are my lyrics I hope that you will fix. =))

 

I don't know if what I have changed affects what you intended.

If you didn't mean 'kill' then I'm not sure what, hopefully something more positive?

Especially considering the last two lines  :)

 

January 28, 2015
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MY DREAM

I found you in the end
I reach out to your body that in my dreams.
A letter from you nestles on my lips at night
That a letter is silecned quielty in my dreams
A huge crossword falls into secretly from your lips
I approach to your breath bit by bit in order to thrill me
I said come on unite into my body
You are authorized tonight

Nur Üveyik


They are my lyrics I hope that you will fix. =))

January 31, 2015
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