Bogoshorts Today I went to a place in Bogotá called Cine Tonalá, there was a festival of short films called Bogoshorts. Was raining and arrived late for this weather. About 22 hours, could get in to a

Pepper

Bogoshorts Today I went to a place in Bogotá called Cine Tonalá, there was a festival of short films called Bogoshorts. Was raining and arrived late for this weather. About 22 hours, could get in to a short film that was nominated in the Oscar awards, was about a babie with a strange disease preventing him to breath while he sleep and therefore require mechanical ventilation for life.

Jan 29, 2015 7:27 AM

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Bogoshorts

Today I went to a place in Bogotá called Cine Tonalá, there was a festival of short films called Bogoshorts. It was raining and I arrived late for this because of the\due to the weather. About 22 hours, could get in to a short film that was nominated in the for an Oscar awards, it was about a babie baby with a strange disease preventing him to from breathing while he sleep slept and therefore required mechanical ventilation for life.

Hi Pepper, I am not sure what you wanted to say in the yellow highlight.

The film "About 22 hours" is a short film that could be nominated for an Oscar.

The film "About 22 hours" is a short film that was nominated for an Oscar.

Buen trabajo!

January 29, 2015

Here is how I would write it!

Today I went to a place in Bogotá, called Cine Tonalá, where there was a festival of short flms called "Bogoshorts." I was delayed because of the rain. "About 22 Hours" is a short film that was nominated for an Oscar. It's about a baby with a strange disease which prevents him from breathing while sleeping, and causes him to require medical ventilation for life.

June 19, 2015

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