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Discuss the question about the way to educate children As we all know, every family is always concerned about the means of teaching their children.Opinions vary from person to person. Some people believe that parents should educate children strictly. With this method, children will follow parents words at home. They‘d like to obey school rules rather than fighting or say dirty words at school.Under the circumstance,they will be what parents want to let them be. For instance which courses they should learning, what university they should go.However,others don't think so. they realize that children should be taught loosely. They should do something they like. They can choose favorite course even though it will not works in the future. They can feel free to express ideas, create new things and make more friends. So, they will become a good person with optimistic,kindheart,tolerate and thoughtful.They'll always keep going when get in trouble. As far as I'm concerned, parents should hold two ways above.Not only can they let chid know the basic principle as a person,but also keep a optimistic attitude for life.what's your perspectives?
Jan 29, 2015 8:42 AM
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Discuss the question about the (best) way to educate children

As we all know, every family is always concerned about the means of teaching their children. Opinions vary from person to person.

Some people believe that parents should educate children strictly. With this method, children will follow their parents words at home. They‘d These parents would like their children to obey school rules rather than fighting or saying dirty words at school. Under the these circumstances, they will be what their parents want to let them be. For instance, which courses they should learning take, what university they should go to.

However, others don't think so agree. They realize that children should be taught loosely. They The children should do something  the things they like. They can choose their favorite course even though it will may(?) not works out for them in the future. They can feel free to express ideas, create new things and make more friends. So, they will become a good person: with optimistic, kindhearted, tolerant and thoughtful. They'll always keep going when they get in trouble.

As far as I'm concerned, parents should hold use both of the ways methods above. Not only can they let their chid know the basic principles (of what?) as a person, but also keep a optimistic attitude for life. What's your perspectives?

January 29, 2015

Discuss the question about the way to educate children

As we all know, every family is always <em>(sweeping statements, typical IELTS English! too many meaningless words)</em> concerned about the means of teaching education of their children. Opinions vary from person to person.
Some people believe that parents should educate children strictly. With this method, approach children will follow their parent's words at home. They‘d like to will obey school rules rather than fighting or say dirty words at school. Under the circumstance, In this situation they will be what their parents want to let them to become. For instance which courses they should study learning, what university they should go. However, others don't think this way, so. they realize believe that children should be taught more freely loosely. They should do somethings they enjoy like. They can choose their favorite course even though it will not works be useful in the future for a career. They can feel free to express ideas, create new things and make more friends. So, they will become a good person people with optimismtic, kind hearts, tolerance and thoughtfulness. They'll always keep going/persevere when they get in trouble.  <em>(Those things do not follow necessarily from either strict or easy-going upbringing)</em>
As far as I'm concerned, at different times parents should hold apply both two ways above. Not only can they let teach their child know the basic principles of a good as a person, but also how to keep a optimistic attitude for life. What's your perspectives<em>('what's' singular, so too perspective should be)</em>

 

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January 30, 2015

Discuss the question about "What is the best the way to educate children?"

 

As we all know, every family is always concerned about the means of for teaching their children. Opinions vary from person to person.
Some people believe that parents should educate their children in a strictly manner. With this method, children will follow parents words at home. They'd They're more likely to obey school rules rather than fighting or saying dirty bad words at school. Under the circumstance, they will be what their parents want to let them be. For instance, which courses they should learning, what university they should go to (or attend). However, others don't think so. They believe realize that children should be taught in a more relaxed manner loosely. They should do something they like. They can choose their favorite course even though it will may not be beneficial for their future employmentworks in the future. They can feel free to express ideas, create new things and make more friends. So, they will become a good person with who is optimistic, kindhearted, tolerate tolerant and thoughtful. They'll always keep going when get in trouble.
As far as I'm concerned, parents should combine these two extremes to come to a middle ground hold two ways above. Not only can they teach let their child know the basic principles as of being a good person, but they can also keep a optimistic attitude for life. What's your perspectives?

 

Great idea for a notebook entry! I agree that a little bit of both world goes a long way in the education of children.

January 29, 2015
I agree, balance is important!
January 29, 2015
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