Juan
Next hop. I've been thinking about where I'd go on my next summer holidays. I'll spend around a fortnight of my holidays days at work, so I have to decide it carefully. Since it will be probably August, I hope to spend some time at the beach but I don't want to lay down for the whole two weeks. I always try to choose places where I can both unwind up and go sightseeing because I feel bored thinking on spend all my holidays just tuning my skin. If I had save much money during this year, I would have booked some days in a country far away from Spain but unluckily I haven't been so thoughtful. So, I will look for a cheap flight to somewhere within Europe, I know it's difficult to buy a cheap flight on August but.. I'll try it! Any suggestion will be welcome. :)
Jan 29, 2015 12:14 PM
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Next hop.

I've been thinking about where I'd go on my next summer holidays. I'll spend around a fortnight of my holidays days at work, so I have to decide it carefully. Since it will be probably be August, I hope to spend some time at the beach but I don't want to lay down for the whole two weeks. I always try to choose places where I can both unwind up and go sightseeing because I feel bored thinking on about spending all my holidays just tuning my skin sunbathing. If I had saved much money during this year, I would have booked some days in a country far away from Spain but unluckily unfortunately I haven't been so thoughtful. So, I will look for a cheap flight to somewhere within Europe, I know it's difficult to buy a cheap flight on August but.. I'll try it!

Any suggestion will be welcome. :)

 

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January 29, 2015

Next hop.

I've been thinking about where I'd go on my next summer holiday holidays. I'll spend around a fortnight of my holidays days at away from (1) work, so I have to decide it carefully. Since it will be probably August, I hope to spend some time at the beach but I don't want to lie on the beach lay down for the whole two weeks. I always try to choose places where I can both unwind up and go sightseeing because I feel bored thinking on if I spend all my holidays just tuning tanning my skin. If I had save much saved enough money during this year, I would have booked some days in a country far away from Spain but unluckily I haven't been so thoughtful. So, I will look for a cheap flight to somewhere within Europe, I know it's difficult to buy a cheap flight on in August but.. I'll try it!

Any suggestion will be welcome. :)

 

(1) I hope I have understood your meaning with this correction

January 29, 2015
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