The Mob museum

The American city (of) Las Vegas is know(n) as (a popular place for the) casino<strike>s</strike> business where a lot of money can be won or lost.
<strike>In</strike> the state of Nevada opened (a) museum. The museum opened (in a) rarely visited part of the city, far from the casinos. The museum tells about organized crime groups <strike>in</strike> (,)generally about (the) American mafia also known as the Mob. The Mob museum describe(s) how the Mafia grew up there. Many immigrants who settled in the cities were hard working and wanted to succeed<strike>ed</strike> in life. Some <strike>of</strike> immigrants <strike>to</strike> <strike>got to</strike> (that did not) succeed chose another way. In another words they chose (a) life of crime. The Mob museum also tells about law enforcement efforts crush(ed) the Mafia. The mafia made a lot of money from gambling and illegally sending alcohol<strike>s</strike>.
The museum opened <strike>in</strike> (on the) 14th of February, 2012. (An) Important Day in Mafia History(;) On February 14, 1929 seven members of (a) criminal group were killed in<strike> Illinois, Chicago</strike> (Chicago, Illinois)  by (the) most-famous gang (leader) Al Capone.
In the museum you can see (the) brick wall where the seven men were murdered. Visitors can also fire a machine gun and sit (in an) electric chair.
Oscar Goodman served as mayor of Las Vegas. He said that “Las Vegas (is a) good place to have (the) museum about the Mob. Basically we are product of the Mob, who moved here from other places”.
Information taken from Voice of America.

 

Hi Jarkynai!!! Great article and good writing. You have to remember to add the articles in front of the nouns, and review the past tense a blit. :)