Olivier
Hi people Hi people how are you? long time not to write you, I hope that I can write more in this website, I feel sad for things like my grand mother, she is sick and I don't know if she will survive or not,and another thing it's that I don't have a job at this moment, I have like been looking for jobs but nothing, I don't know what to do, I feel really sad because my age and I haven't found a good job since I left the university, well I am writing this message because this is how I feel this moment, I hope to be very concentrate with my studies with English. I used to think that learning English or another language beside Spanish, would be a good idea in my town, but the thing is that getting a good job, it depends of who you are, what friends do you have, if you have connections and stuff like that, I believe that system doesn't help me, because it depends of my influences not what I know, well I don't know what to say, bye for the moment, take care people. thanks for reading this message
Jan 30, 2015 2:20 AM
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Your English is pretty good. Cheer up! I belive you will hlpe you find a good job. Tomorow is another day!
January 30, 2015

Hi people

Hi people how are you? Long time no write! I hope that I can write more on this website. I feel sad for things like my grandmother. She is sick and I don't know if she will survive or not. Another thing is that I don't have a job at this moment. I have like been looking for jobs but nothing. I don't know what to do. I feel really sad because my age and I haven't found a good job since I left the university. Well I am writing this message because this is how I feel at this moment. I hope to be very focused with my studies with English.
I used to think that learning English or another language beside Spanish would be a good idea in my town, but the thing is that getting a good job depends on who you are, what friends do you have, if you have connections and stuff like that. I believe that system doesn't help me, because it depends on my influences not what I know. Well, I don't know what to say, bye for the moment, take care people.
Thanks for reading this message,

Overall great job! 

January 30, 2015
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