Andrea
실패했어요 오늘에 제 친구와 저는 마카론을 만들어봤어요. 하지만 실패했어요. 마카론은 맛있는데 곱은 것 안 맞았어요. 저는 진짜 실망시켜요. 항상 마카론을 만들고 싶었어요. 다시 만들어야 할 텐데요. Today my friend and I tried to make macarons, but we failed. They tasted good, but it didn't bake right. I'm really disappointed. I have always wanted to make macarons. I guess I will have to make them again.
Jan 30, 2015 5:05 AM
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미카론 만들기에 실패하다

오늘 제 친구랑 전 마카론을 만들어봤지요. 그런데 영 아니더라고요. 맛읏 좋았지만 잘 구워지지가 않은 듯. 실망스럽더라고요. 늘 마카론을 요리하고 싶었는데. 다시 만들어봐야 겠어요. 

 

Very good writing. I edited more. Please compare my correction to the former correction. There should be many ways to edit writing. 

January 31, 2015

실패했어요

오늘에 제 친구와 저는 마카론을 만들어봤어요. 하지만 실패했어요. 마카론은 맛있는데 잘 못 구웠어요. 난 정말 실망했어요. 항상 마카론을 만들고 싶었어요. 나중에 다시 만들꺼에요.

Today my friend and I tried to make macarons, but we failed. They tasted good, but it didn't bake right. I'm really disappointed. I have always wanted to make macarons. I guess I will have to make them again.

January 30, 2015
Thanks for your help! Yes, macarons are challenging. That's why I have been putting off trying to make them. I'll have to try again soon.
January 30, 2015
For me personally, macarons are the most diffilcult ones to bake. Pretty but tricky.
January 30, 2015
항상 마카롱을 만들어보고 싶었는데 실망스러웠어요. 다음에 다시 만들어야 할 것 같아요.
January 30, 2015
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