Patricia
A LITTLE TO ME Hi people! I'm going to talk about to me. My name is Patricia and it's the first time that I come in here. I live in a small town in the north of Spain where I work as Computer Technician. I'm studying English, this course I'm studying intermediate English. For me the most difficult is speaking, but I also have to practise writting. I love walking for the mountains, taking pictures, knitting scarfs, hats and the other things and also I practise Yoga. Sometimes I go running, skiing and swimming. I like listening differents kind of music, for example, pop, salsa or dance, it's depends os singer or group. Nowadays, I study an online computer degree about application web and in this moments I don't have time for I do all things, because I want to do much things. Additionally, I like travelling, althought I would like traveling more times. So far I have told a little about me, I hope to have written well. Bye.
Jan 30, 2015 8:18 PM
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A LITTLE TO ME

Hi people!

I'm going to talk about to me.

My name is Patricia and it's the first time that I come in here.

I live in a small town in the north of Spain where I work as Computer Technician. I'm studying English, this course I'm studying and taking an intermediate English course. For me, the most difficult part is speaking, but I also have to practise writting.

I love walking for the mountains hiking, taking pictures, knitting scarfs, hats and the other things and also I also practise Yoga. Sometimes, I go running, skiing and swimming. I like listening to different kinds of music, for example, pop, salsa or dance, it depends on the singer or group.

 I am currently working towards an online degree in web applications. Right now, I don't have time for all the things that I like to do. 

 

A couple of notes if it helps:

1) "Nowadays" is not a word native english speakers use very much, typically only when making a comparison to historical times. It is not wrong but it does stick out in conversation. "Currently" is a more common word choice for writing, in casual conversation we would just say "now I am studying..." 

2) We "study" specific courses but "work towards" degrees

3) "In this moment" is very specific to the actual time whereas "right now" can be used more broadly

 


Additionally, I like travelling, although I would like to travel more.

So far I have told a little about me, I hope to have written well.

Sí, escribe muy bien.

Bye. Chao =)

January 30, 2015

A LITTLE TO ABOUT ME

Hi people!

I'm going to talk about to me.

My name is Patricia and it's the first time that I come in am on here.

I live in a small town situated in the north of Spain; where I work as Computer Technician. I'm currently studying English this course I'm studying and I am going through a course on Intermediate English. For me the most difficult aspect of learning English is speaking, but I know that I also have to practise writing.

I love walking for going for a hike through the mountains, taking pictures, knitting scarves, hats and the many other things. and also I also practise Yoga and sometimes I'd go running, skiing and or swimming. I like listening to differents kinds of music. For example, pop, salsa or dance, but it's depends os on the singer or group.

Nowadays, However, since I started taking study an online computer degree about on application webs, and in this moments I don't have time for I do I have had little time left to do all my favourite things; ironically because I want to do much as many things as possible.

Additionally, I like travelling, althought I would like to traveling more times have more time to travel.

So far I have told a little about me and I hope to that I have written well.

Bye.

 

<em>It was a good effort! Interesting hobbies that you have there. :) </em>

January 30, 2015

A LITTLE TO ABOUT ME

Hi people!

I'm going to talk about to me.

My name is Patricia and it's (this is) the first time that I come in here. I've been here/written anything here.

I live in a small town in the north of Spain where I work as a computer technician. I'm studying English, this course I'm studying intermediate English. (Perhaps it would be better to say I study English and am currently on an intermediate level course)  For me the most difficult is speaking, the hardest thing is speaking English, but I need to practise my writting skills too.

I love walking in  for the mountains, taking pictures, knitting scarfs, hats and the other things and also I practise Yoga. Sometimes I go running, skiing and swimming. I like listening to differents kinds of music, for example, pop, salsa or dance, it's depends on the singer or group.

Nowadays  Currently/At the moment, I am doing a degree online in web application.  (perhaps here it would be better to say   This doesn't leave me much time to fit everything in as there is a lot that I want to do.   in this moments I don't have time for I do all things, because I want to do much things.

Additionally, I like travelling, althought I would like traveling more times. Meaning unclear. Liked to have travelled more? or like to have more time to do it?

So far I have told a little about me,  now you know a little about me. I hope it's written well/I've written well.

Bye.

 

Some good expressions in there  Just be careful with the phrasal verbs and good luck with the degree! Best wishes. dipity. xx

May 16, 2015

A LITTLE ABOUT ME

Hi people!

I'm going to talk about about me.

My name is Patricia and it's the first time that I have come in here.

I live in a small town in the north of Spain where I work as Computer Technician. I'm studying English. The course I'm studying is intermediate English. For me the most difficult part is speaking, but I also have to practise writting.

I love walking in the mountains, taking pictures, knitting scarfs, hats and the other things, and also I practise Yoga. Sometimes I go running, skiing and swimming. I like listening to differents kindof music, for example, pop, salsa or dance. It  depends on the singer or group.

Nowadays, I am studying for an online computer degree about application web applications and at this moments I don't have time for all the things I do, I do all things, because I want to do many things.

Additionally, I like travelling, althought I would like to travel more often. traveling more times.

So far I have told you a little about me, I hope I have written well.

Bye.

 

Very nice English!

January 30, 2015
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