Diary Today I completed my first lesson here. It did help with my writing. My problem identified by the teacher is like what our professor said " curve of knowledge". I will try to explain my ideas

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Diary Today I completed my first lesson here. It did help with my writing. My problem identified by the teacher is like what our professor said " curve of knowledge". I will try to explain my ideas to my friend before writing next time. I hope this will help.

Jan 30, 2015 10:57 PM

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Diary

Today I completed my first lesson here. It did help with my writing. My problem identified by the teacher is what our professor said : " curve of knowledge".
I will try to explain my ideas to my friend before writing next time. I hope this will help.

January 31, 2015

Diary

Today I completed my first lesson here. It did help with my writing. My problem identified by the teacher is like what our professor said " curve of knowledge".
I will try to explain my ideas to my friend before writing next time. I hope this will help.

'My problem identified by the teacher is like what our professor said . . ' : a bit clumsy

My problem identified by the teacher is what our professor (has) said : . .

/ The teacher identified my problem as what our professor has said : . .

. . otherwise good !

January 30, 2015

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