Rachel
1月 30号
今天很冷。整天下雨. 我不喜欢天冷。
Jan 31, 2015 4:18 AM
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1月 30号
今天很冷。整天下了一整天的雨. 我不喜欢天冷冷天。
January 31, 2015
前两个句子，我觉得没有问题。最后一个句子有点儿不通顺！verb+noun：改为“冷天”，会好一些！ 我也不喜欢很冷的天啊！：）
February 2, 2015
今天很冷。整天下雨. 我不喜欢天氣冷。
February 2, 2015
1月 30号
今天天气很冷。一整天都下雨. 我不喜欢天气很冷。
February 2, 2015
今天很冷。整天都下雨. 我不喜欢这么冷的天。
January 31, 2015
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Rachel
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Italian
Learning Language
Chinese (Mandarin), Italian
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