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can someone help with notebook, please. thanks for your help Good day to you. How are things? What's the weather like? I hope all is well with you and your family and you are enjoyingnice weather. As for me, i am OK. My daughter and I are staying at my sister's. She lives five minute walk from the church. In the morning my daughter and I went to the morning service. Afrwe that we had a quick meal at my sister. I felt so sleepy that I fell asleep. My sister has no internet and no TV so my daughter entertains herself or me. It is so wet outside that we gave decided rather to stay inside that get wet. I am going to make buckwheat now. Please take care Love,
Jan 31, 2015 10:22 AM
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Can someone correct this notebook, please? Thanks for your help.

Good day to you.
How are things? What's the weather like?
I hope all is well with you and your family, and you are enjoying the nice weather.
As for me, I am OK.
My daughter and I are staying at my sister's. She lives five minutes walk from the church.
In the morning my daughter and I went to the morning service.
After that we had a quick meal at my sister's. I felt so sleepy that I fell asleep.
My sister has no internet and no TV, so my daughter entertains herself and me.
It is so wet outside that we have decided to stay inside rather than get wet.
I am going to make buckwheat now.
Please take care
Love,

 

It would sound more natural to say "I was so tired that I fell asleep." 

 

Well done!

January 31, 2015
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