Seeing an Acupuncturist doctor
Today my mom takes took me to an acupuncture clinic; and my mom already the made an appointment was made last week.
When we arrived at the clinic, we give gave the nurse our health card, then waited for the doctor to call us in.
We waiting about 30 minute, then the doctor call us After about 30 minutes my mom and I were called in. she The Doctor asked us to tell her about our bodies (you can't say "our body " because it soind like two people in one body); how did we felt recently, then tell us don't and how we shouldn't eat fried foods. She also tell told me that I got a cold, but it wasn't serious.
After that we have got a massage. Next we went go supermarket grocery shopping, and then we headed go home.
In Taiwan, acupuncture clinics is are very common, and my mom goes to acupuncture clinic one every Saturday.
(This short story is past tense !)
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