Daisuke
My bicycle had a blowout I always go to my part time job by bicycle.Today,after my part time job finished,I think I get home.but my bicycle had a blowout.I was sad and angry.and Tomorrow,I gotta go part time job in morning.But I haven't time to repair my bicycle.So I think I borrow my mother's bicycle.
Jan 31, 2015 3:00 PM
Corrections · 3

My bicycle had a blowout  (OR 'a flat tyre')

 

I always go to my part time job by bicycle. Today, after my part time job had finished, I think I get thought about going home, but my bicycle had a blowout. (OR 'a flat tyre')

 

'had' - Use the PAST PERFECT when you want to show that something happened before something else in the past.

 

I was sad and angry, and tomorrow, I've gotta got to go to my part time job in the morning. But I haven't got time to repair my bicycle. So, I think I borrow my mother's bicycle.

 

'Gotta' is only really used when speaking or in very casual texts like song lyrics or text messages. 


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