Matias
About me..and my Family Hi! I'm 26 years old. I'm degreed in electronic engineering (I ended with my carrer in November ). My mother is teacher, she is 54 years old. My Brother is called Pablo. He is 24 years old and he is living in Córdoba Capital. I'm living in a small town called Agua de oro (water of gold, not golden water). My father is taxi driver, he is working in Córdoba capital too. He is 60 years old. Your name is Enrique. My sister is called Rebeca. She is 19 years old. She is living with my mother.
Jan 31, 2015 4:51 PM
Corrections · 7
1

About me..and my Family

Hi! I'm 26 years old. I'm degreed in electronic engineering (I ended with my carrer in November ). My mother is teacher, she is 54 years old. My Brother is called Pablo. He is 24 years old and he is living in Córdoba Capital. I'm living in a small town called Agua de oro (water of gold, not golden water).
My father is taxi driver, he is working in Córdoba capital too. He is 60 years old. Your name is Enrique.
My sister is called Rebeca. She is 19 years old. She is living with my mother.

 

 

Hello Matias, this is an excellent paragraph telling us about your family. Please see my corrections for you......

 In November, I passed my Degree in Electronic Engineering. My Mother is a teacher and she is 54 years old.

My Father is a taxi driver and he works.......

His name is Enrique.

 

Perhaps for the last 2 sentences you could join them together eg She is 19 years old and lives with my Mother.

 

Thank you.

 

January 31, 2015
1

About me..and my Family

Hi! I'm 26 years old. I'm degreed graduated in electronic engineering (I ended have finished with my it paralell to my carrier in last November ). My mother is a teacher, she is 54 years old. My Brother is called Pablo. He is 24 years old and he is living in Córdoba Capital. I'm living in a small town called Agua de oro (water of gold, not golden water).
My father is a taxi driver, he is working in Córdoba capital too. He is 60 years old. Your his name is Enrique.
My sister is called Rebeca. She is 19 years old. She is living with my mother.

---------------------------------------------------------

ex: -My friend John has a good aptitude in math he is called a math eating!

-The baby was born in 1.31.2015, she is called Tina.

January 31, 2015

About me, and my family

Hi! I'm 26 years old. I have a degree in electronic engineering (I ended with my career in November ). My mother is a teacher, and she is 54 years old. My brother is named Pablo. He is 24 years old and he is living in Córdoba Capitol. I'm living in a small town called Agua de oro (water of gold, not golden water).
My father is a taxi driver. He is working in Córdoba Capitol too. He is 60 years old. His name is Enrique.
My sister is named Rebeca. She is 19 years old. She is living with my mother.

 

Great job! Keep up the good work. :) 

January 31, 2015
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!