Elisabetta
Help me please! Successful is good to a certain extent Many people dream of being famous in entertainment world, but there are two ways: to be famous, or to be successful but not so well-known. To be famous have a lot of strengths but have also weaknesses. If you are famous means that you are an actor, a singer, a model or other works that include the entertainment world. If you are good in your work, these jobs will bring you to become famous and also they will have you a lot of money. People could recognise you in the street or in shops and, for example, they’ll ask you an autograph or some photos. You could participate at exclusive parties and would meet another famous people. However, be famous is not always easy. You would not have your privacy, paparazzi and media would always stay in the place where you at for take some photos or ask you for interviews. Despite having fans is a beautiful things, they could chase you everywhere and infiltrate also in your home for steal something about you. In addition, much money means to lose control, for example, some stars began to drink alcohol or take drugs. To be successful but not so well-known conversely, means that you have reach a good points in your career on the show, though not many people know you. Maybe is better to be no so well-known because you can have loyal friends and a good salary. Local people would recognise you but anyone infiltrate in your life and privacy. Concluding, I prefer to be successful but not so well-known because I think that I would enjoy more my job and I would not like that fans know all the ins and outs of my life.
Feb 1, 2015 5:51 PM
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Help me please!

Successful is good to a certain extent

Many people dream of being famous in the entertainment world, but there are two ways: to be famous, or to be successful but not so well-known.

To be famous, you have a lot of strengths but also have weaknesses. If you are famous that means you are an actor, a singer, a model or something else that includes the entertainment world. If you are good in your work, these jobs will bring you to become famous and also they will give you a lot of money. People could recognise you in the street or in shops and, for example, they’ll ask you for an autograph or some photos. You could participate at exclusive parties and would meet other famous people. However, being famous is not always easy. You would not have your privacy, paparazzi and media would always stay in the place where you are to take some photos or ask you for interviews. Despite that, having fans is a beautiful thing, they could chase you everywhere and also infiltrate your home to steal something from you. In addition, a lot of money means to lose control, for example, some stars began to drink alcohol or take drugs.

To be successful but not so well-known conversely means that you have reach a good points in your career on the show, though not many people know you. Maybe it's better to be not so well-known because you can have loyal friends and a good salary. Local people would recognise you but anyone could infiltrate in your life and privacy.

Concluding, I prefer to be successful but not so well-known because I think that I would enjoy my job more and I would not like that fans know all the ins and outs of my life.

February 1, 2015
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