episode 1 - confession

Ok, lets make this short to not scare people. <----( How you can say this: Okay, lets make this short and sweet.) I'm trying to improve my english. Or better to say learn it, because it's terrible. I think I'm quite good at understanding written english text (the overall 'about' at least). But I don't speak it in point of fact,<---- (what you might want to say:  I am able to write in English, however it is very difficult for me to speak it. cannot write properly and often don't understand natives speech. Mainly British people. <----- (what you might want to say: Sometimes I am unable to understand when the natives speak.) 

Here are some suggestions: 

I feel as though you conveyed the overall idea of your entry, however there are quite a few things that need to be rephrased. 

Overall, you are fairly good at spelling! Keep up the good work!