On my way home

I'm on my way home which is very exciting！Maybe it will take me 6 hours if the traffic is not heavy. I am taking a medium-sized coach (I would use the word "bus") to home. I have already had my breakfast in my seat, but I didn't enjoy it because the bread was dry and hard.  It seemed like it was made several days ago. It was hard to chew and I couldn't even swallow it without water!! There is a kid who is about 2 or 3 years old who's in front of me with his parents, and he keeps crying loudly. It's very noisy and annoying, however there's nothing I can do but wear my earplugs! The worst thing is a woman near me is vomiting because of carsickness, and it smells really, really terrible!!!! Oh, I can't live with this anymore! I want to get off the bus right now!!

Good work.  Be careful with your spacing. Make sure punctuation comes directly after a word and that there are spaces between each word and after punctuation. 

Like this: I had breakfast, but I didn't enjoy it. 

Not like this: I had breakfast , but I didn't enjoy it .