Lucy
My Pets I'm Lucy and I love my Pets! I have four cats, one dog and a parrot The first cat, is Silvestre, he loves play with boxes The second cat is Angelo, he is the Silvestre's twin, he is very crazy, he always fight with other cats The third cat is Pancha, she is a beautiful cat, is very pacific. The four cat is Pancho, he is Pancha's son, he is very fat and sleepyhead. The dog is a fattie cuttie, she sleep all day And the last pet is Catalina, the parrot, she talks and laught all day. Thanks for read!
Feb 17, 2015 1:07 AM
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My Pets

I'm Lucy and I love my Pets!
I have four cats, one dog and a parrot
The first cat, is Silvestre, he loves playing with boxes
The second cat is Angelo, he is the Silvestre's twin, he is very crazy, he always fights with the other cats
The third cat is Pancha, she is a beautiful cat, is very quiet.
The fourth cat is Pancho, he is Pancha's son, he is very fat and is a  sleepyhead.
The dog is a fattie cuttie, she sleeps all day
And the last pet is Catalina, the parrot, she talks and laughs all day.
Thanks for reading!

February 17, 2015
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My Pets

I'm Lucy and I love my Pets!
I have four cats, one dog and a parrot.
The first cat, is Silvestre, he loves play with boxes.
The second cat is Angelo, he is the Silvestre's twin, he is very crazy, he always fights with other cats. 
The third cat is Pancha, she is a beautiful cat, she is very pacific(what do you mean by this?).
The fourth cat is Pancho, he is Pancha's son, he is very fat and is a sleepyhead.
The dog is a fattie cuttie, she sleeps all day
And the last pet is Catalina, the parrot, she talks and laughs all day.
Thanks for read!

February 17, 2015

My Pets

I'm Lucy and I love my Pets!
I have four cats, one dog and a parrot
The first cat, is Silvestre, he loves playing with boxes
The second cat is Angelo, he is the Silvestre's twin, he is very crazy, he always fight with other cats
The third cat is Pancha, she is a beautiful cat, and  very pacific.
The four cat is Pancho, he is Pancha's son, he is very fat and a sleepyhead.
The dog is a fattie and cuttie, she sleeps all day
And the last pet is Catalina, the parrot, she talks and laughs all day.
Thanks for reading!

February 17, 2015

My Pets

I'm Lucy and I love my pets!
I have four cats, one dog and a parrot.
The first cat is Silvestre. He loves to play with boxes.
The second cat is Angelo. He is the Silvestre's twin. He is very crazy, and he always fights with other cats.
The third cat is Pancha. She is a beautiful cat and is very pacific peaceful.
The fourth cat is Pancho. He is Pancha's son. He is very fat and a sleepyhead.
The dog is a fattie cuttie [See comments below]. She sleeps all day.
And the last pet is Catalina, the parrot. She talks and laughs all day.
Thanks for reading!

COMMENTS

I enjoyed reading about all your pets! I have four parrots and three cats myself.

* You don't need "the" before a proper noun in most cases. (There are some exceptions but for most names, we don't use "the".) So "He is the first cat's twin" and "He is Silvestre's twin" are okay. But not "the Silvestre."

* "Pacific" means "peaceful" but we don't use it in this way. Most of the time, we just use "peaceful."

* Fattie cutie: I understand the meaning 100 percent but it's not standard English. (I realize you probably know this.) If you write "cutie," it is better to write only one "t." It's someone or something that is cute. Two consonants together usually tells the reader that the vowel before them is "short." With two "t"s, it gives the word a different sound. It is the difference between "dinner" (la cena) and "diner" (la cafetería).

I hope this helps!

August 15, 2018

My Pets

I'm Lucy and I love my Pets!
I have four cats, one dog, and a parrot
The first cat, is Silvestre, he loves playing with boxes 
The second cat  is ngelo, he is the Silvestre's twin, he is very crazy because he always fights with other cats
The third cat is ,Pancha, she  is a beautiful cat and is very pacific (you can also say calm/peaceful).
The fourth cat is Pancho, he is Pancha's son, he is a very fat and sleepyhead.
The dog is a fattie cuttie,  a fat cutie and she sleeps all day
And the last pet is Catalina, the parrot, she talks and laught laughs all day.
Thanks for reading!


C O R R E C T E D  V E R S I O N #1 (without some of the pronouns)

My Pets

I'm Lucy and I love my Pets! 
I have four cats, one dog, and a parrot. 
The first cat, Silvestre, loves playing with boxes. 
The second cat is Angelo,Silvestre's twin, is very crazy because he always fights with other cats. 
The third cat, Pancha, is a beautiful cat and is very peaceful/calm/pacific. 
The fourth cat Pancho, Pancha's son, is a very fat sleepyhead. 
The dog is a fat cutie and she sleeps all day. 
And the last pet is Catalina, the parrot, she talks and laughs all day. 
Thanks for reading!


C O R R E C T E D  V E R S I O N  #2 (with all of the pronouns)


My Pets

I'm Lucy and I love my Pets! 
I have four cats, one dog, and a parrot. 
The first cat is Silvestre and he loves playing with boxes. 
The second cat Angelo, Silvestre's twin, is very crazy because he always fights with other cats. 
The third cat is Pancha and she is a very pacific/peaceful/calm and beautiful and cat. 
The fourth cat is Pancho, Pancha's son, he is a very fat sleepyhead. 
The dog is a fat cutie and she sleeps all day. 
And the last pet is Catalina the parrot and she talks and laughs all day. 
Thanks for reading!


August 13, 2018
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