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Viet/Eng 4 expression at work is needed! Please fix my sentences. I need it to be the most polite form and simple. 1) Hello, my name is Amanda from Tiger's Club. 2) I am calling to ask if someone is going to pick up Tom? 3) Could you come to the school right now? 4) Please pick up Tom between 5:20pm-5:40pm. Please fix my sentences. I need it to be the most polite form and simple. 1) Hello, my name is Amanda from Tiger's Club. Xin chào, tôi tên là Amanda từ Club Tiger. 2) I am calling to ask if someone is going to pick up Tom? Tôi gọi hỏi có ai rước Tom? 3) Could you come to the school right now? Cỏ có thể đến trường ngay bây giờ? 4) Please pick up Tom between 5:20pm-5:40pm. Làm ơn rước Tom giữa năm giờ hai mươi phút to năm bốn mươi phút.
Feb 20, 2015 7:09 AM
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Viet/Eng 4 expression at work is needed!

Please fix my sentences. I need it to be the most polite form and simple.

1) Hello, my name is Amanda from Tiger's Club.

2) I am calling to ask if someone is going to pick up Tom?

3) Could you come to the school right now?

4) Please pick up Tom between 5:20pm-5:40pm.


Please fix my sentences. I need it to be the most polite form and simple.

1) Hello, my name is Amanda from Tiger's Club.
Xin chào, tôi tên là Amanda từ ở Club câu lạc bộ Tiger.

2) I am calling to ask if someone is going to pick up Tom?
Tôi gọi để hỏi xem có ai rước đưa anh Tom về được không?

3) Could you come to the school right now?
Cỏ Cô có thể đến trường ngay bây giờ được không?

4) Please pick up Tom between 5:20pm-5:40pm.
Làm ơn rước đón Tom khoảng  năm giờ hai mươi phút to tới năm bốn mươi phút.

 

The verb 'rước' is rather formal,and you just use it if you means to someone very important or when you welcome them in a special ceremony.

March 21, 2015
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Viet/Eng 4 expression at work is needed!

Please fix my sentences. I need it to be the most polite form and simple.

1) Hello, my name is Amanda from Tiger's Club.

2) I am calling to ask if someone is going to pick up Tom?

3) Could you come to the school right now?

4) Please pick up Tom between 5:20pm-5:40pm.


Please fix my sentences. I need it to be the most polite form and simple.

1) Hello, my name is Amanda from Tiger's Club.
Xin chào, tôi tên là Amanda từ Club Tiger.

2) I am calling to ask if someone is going to pick up Tom?
Tôi gọi hỏi có ai rước/đón Tom?

3) Could you come to the school right now?
Cỏ Anh/chị có thể đến trường ngay bây giờ được không?

(add "được không?" at the end of polite requests like "Can you please...? / Could you...?")

4) Please pick up Tom between 5:20pm-5:40pm.
Làm ơn/Vui lòng rước/đón Tom giữa từ năm giờ hai mươi phút to đến năm giờ bốn mươi phút.

March 3, 2015
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Viet/Eng 4 expression at work is needed!

Please fix my sentences. I need it to be the most polite form and simple.

1) Hello, my name is Amanda from Tiger's Club.

2) I am calling to ask if someone is going to pick up Tom?

3) Could you come to the school right now?

4) Please pick up Tom between 5:20pm-5:40pm.


Please fix my sentences. I need it to be the most polite form and simple.

1) Hello, my name is Amanda from Tiger's Club.
Xin chào, tôi tên là Amanda, đến từ Club Tiger. (But generally I think your sentence is formal enough)

2) I am calling to ask if someone is going to pick up Tom?
Tôi gọi để hỏi có ai đi đón Tom không? 

3) Could you come to the school right now?
Cô có thể đến trường ngay bây giờ được không ạ?

4) Please pick up Tom between 5:20pm-5:40pm.
Trong khoảng thời gian từ 5 giờ 20 phút đến 5 giờ 40 phút, xin vui lòng đến đón Tom ạ.

February 21, 2015
We don't often use "tôi" , "em" is so much better for a girl to talk to people who are older than you.... :)
April 4, 2015

Viet/Eng 4 expression at work is needed!

Please fix my sentences. I need it to be the most polite form and simple.

1) Hello, my name is Amanda from Tiger's Club.

2) I am calling to ask if someone is going to pick up Tom?

3) Could you come to the school right now?

4) Please pick up Tom between 5:20pm-5:40pm.


Please fix my sentences. I need it to be the most polite form and simple.

1) Hello, my name is Amanda from Tiger's Club.
Xin chào, tôi tên là Amanda, tôi đến từ Club Tiger.

2) I am calling to ask if someone is going to pick up Tom?
Tôi gọi hỏi xem có ai đi rước Tom hay không?

3) Could you come to the school right now?
Cô có thể đến trường ngay bây giờ được không ạ?

4) Please pick up Tom between 5:20pm-5:40pm.
khoảng từ 5 giờ 20 phút đến 5 giờ 40 phút, vui lòng đi đón Tom ạ

February 23, 2015
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