zahra
Best friend Best friend is a person you can talk to him/her without any worry. she want best thing for you and you want best thing for her. my best friend ,Sahar, is intelligent , calm , lovely , tall .and she study radiology . i really like her . when i am mixed up she help me to improve . when i fail she becomes sad and she encourage me to try. Sahar , thanck you for being beside me.
Feb 20, 2015 11:19 AM
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Best friend

A best friend is a person you can talk to him/her without any worry.
She wants the best thing for you and you want the best thing for her.
My best friend, Sahar, is intelligent, calm, lovely, and tall. She studies radiology. I really like her.
When I am mixed up, she helps me to improve. When I fail, she becomes sad and she encourage me to try harder.

Sahar, thank you for being beside me.

 

-Capitalize the first letter in a sentence and the personal pronoun 'I'.

-Don't leave a space before a comma or a period.

March 1, 2015
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