Monday

Tomorrow is Monday (International Sloth day). I will wake up to work at 6:00 o'clock.
Here, the subway is very crowded, so I'll arrive at work with rumpled clothes. The itinerary takes thirty minutes, but it is complicated.
I want to take a vacation to relax in Miami Beach, it has been four years since I have had a vacation.
Today, I study some verbs, numbers, ordinal numbers and prepositions. I hope my writing has improved.

Thanks for your corrections! :)

<em>I hope you get to take a vacation soon!  :-)</em>

Monday

Tomorrow is Monday ( International Sloth Day) and  I will wake up to go to work at 6:00 o'clock.
Here, The subway is very crowded here so I usually arrive at work with rumpled clothes. The trip  itinerary only takes thirty minutes but is complicated.
I want to take a vacations to relax on Miami Beach as I have not had one in there is four years. that I don't take vacations.
Today, I studied some verbs, numbers, ordenal numbers and prepositions and I hope that my writing has improved. (no need to repeat "I" in the same sentence as it is understood already)

Thanks for your corrections! :)

Well done Alinne!  Try and use connector words to combine short sentences if possible as it makes it easier and more interesting to read.  Keep up your good work and I hope that you are able to finally have a vacation soon!

Monday

Tomorrow is Monday ( International Sloth day), I wake up to go to work at 6:00 o'clock.
Here, the subway is very crowded, so I arrived at work with wrinkled clothes. The itinerary takes thirty minutes but it is complicated to get there.
I want to take vacations to relax in Miami Beach, there are four years that I don't take vacations.
Today, I study some verbs, numbers, ordinal numbers and prepositions, I hope my writing has improved.

Thanks for your corrections! :)

Good JOB!

Remeber commas and to capitalize week days(  :