More one day.

Well, Guys! Good Night! ( You use good night when you are leaving, not as a greeting) (; 
How are you doing? I hope fine :)

Another day I am here on italki and I'm writing my lesson's each day.
You're excellents classmates, I like so much!!! (really) ( You can say, " I really like you" or "I like you so much", which is what you put.)
I was watching a video called "Como falar em inglês?" ("how to speak English?").
There Isn't any miracles for learninga language, but I have commitment and dedication with English every days. (And I have).
Today, I feel pleased to learn, because it is more attractive ( Fun or enjoyable)with your help!
Today, I still need to study more tense verbs! Lets go! The time never stops!

Thanks!

One more day.

Hello, Guys! Good Night!
How are you doing? I hope  fine :)

One more day, and me here I am on italki, writing my lesson each day.
You're excelents classmates, I like like you all so much!!! (really)
I was watching the video "Como falar em inglês?" ("how to speak English?").
It does not provide a miracles for learning, but there is it requires commitment and dedication with English every days. (And I have this commitment).
Today, I feel  am pleased to learn, because it is more attractive enjoyable <em>(I am not sure if understood correctly whether this is what you wanted to say, but attractive does not seem to fit here)</em> with your help!
Today I still need to study more ten more verbs! Lets go! The Time never stops! 

Good work Aline!  

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Thanks!