Aleksander
Two stores There are two store grocery nearby my home where usually I buy food. One is more cheaper and is situated near, the second is more expensive and a little farther than the first. But I like more the second although the first has some advantages. Point is that the second has more choice of grocery and they have more high quality. I buy a bread, groats, macaroni in the first and the second I buy a perishable goods, fruits and meat. I think it's clearly why I do in that way.
Feb 26, 2015 9:09 PM
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There are two grocery stores nearby my house  where I usually buy food. One is cheaper and is located closer, the second one is more expensive and a little further than the first one. But I like more the second one although the first one has some advantages. The point is that the second one has more choice of groceries and it  has  higher quality. I buy  bread, groats, macaroni from the first one and  from the second one I buy perishable goods, fruits and meat. I think it's clear why I do this way.

February 26, 2015
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Two stores

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Your last sentence "I think it's clearly why I do in that way" is incorrect, but I don't really know what it means in the context of the rest of the paragraph. Gramatically, "I think it's clear why I do it that way" is correct, but I'm still not sure what this sentence really has to do with the rest of the paragraph or why it is needed.

February 26, 2015
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