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anybody help me check my composition?Thanks! Mrs. Stone had spend the whole morning weaving a scarf.It was nearly lunch time,so she decided to pick some blackberries in the garden.She was just about to leave for home when she heard a noise in the bushes.Then she saw an animal which looked like a cat.She knew it was not
Feb 27, 2015 11:08 AM
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Mrs. Stone spent the whole morning weaving a scarf. It was nearly lunch time, so she decided to pick some blackberries in the garden. She was just about to leave for home when she heard a noise in the bushes. Then, she saw an animal which looked like a cat but knew it was not.

February 27, 2015
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