My three Parrots
I have three parrots, their name are dabao,huihui and xiaocai. When I finish my work I always play with them, they like me. When I get home, they will say ho.. ho..to call me to let them out of the cage. When I open the door of the cage, they fly out and stop on my fingers or my head.Dabao is the best one, outside he can recognize me.
** I is is Always capitalized when used alone.
When starting a new sentence the fist letter of the first word in the sentence is always capitalized, and there should always be a space after a puncuation of word.
Your sentente structure and word use is very good!!