diane
My three Parrots I have three parrots,their name are dabao,huihui and xiaocai. When i finish my work ,i always paly with them.they also like me.when i get home,they will say ho.. ho..to call me let them out of the cage.when i open the door of the cage,they fly out and stop on my fingers or my head.Dabao is the best one, outside he can recgnize me.
Feb 27, 2015 12:31 PM
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My three Parrots

I have three parrots, their name are dabao,huihui and xiaocai. When I finish my work I always play with them, they like me. When I get home, they will say ho.. ho..to call me to let them out of the cage. When I open the door of the cage, they fly out and stop on my fingers or my head.Dabao is the best one, outside he can recognize me.

 

** I is  is Always capitalized when used alone. 

 

When starting a new sentence the fist letter of the first word in the sentence is always capitalized, and there should  always be a space after a puncuation of word. 

 

Your sentente structure and word use is very good!! 

February 27, 2015
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