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Hello everyone, my name is Mia. I have problems writing essay* so for that*, I will try to write everyday* here to improve my skill in writing.

In our life we had better* had,although* if is just one time, a bad moment. That moment when we feel everything is wrong and the world is *giving you the back. That is the time *than I am right now. I want to run away, try to fly in* someplace where I do not know *nobody. Sometime* I want to give up everything and just not exist. Therefore, I star* to thing that it* will come better moments where you will be the leader of your life. In fact, try to work out your life for* be proud of yourself. Some people say that the 20s are the gold* ages, where everything is beautiful and you think you can eat* the world. However, I *not agree with that because I am in my 20s, and I feel like *I have 10 years old.

Writing Skill
Hello everyone, my name is Mia. I have problems writing essays, so for that reason, I will try to write every day (here) to improve my (skill in) writing.

In/during our life we have had, even if (it is) just once, a bad moment : that moment when we feel everything is wrong, and the world is turning its back on you. That is the moment for me right now. I want to run away, try to fly to some place where I do not know anybody. Sometimes I want to give up everything and just not exist. Therefore, I start to think that better moments
will come when you will be the leader of your life. In fact, try to work out your life to be proud of yourself. Some people say that your 20s are the golden years, where everything is beautiful and you think you can rule the world. However, I do not agree with that because I am in my 20s, and I feel as though I am 10 years old.

writting Writing Skill

Hello everyone, my name is Mia. I am having problems in writing essays and so for that, I will try to write one here everyday here to improve my writing skill in writing.

In our life lives we have good times and even had better had,although if is just one time, a one bad moment. That moment when occurs, we feel everything is wrong and the world is giving getting at you the back. That This is the time than that moment I am in right now. I want to run away, try to fly in someplace some place where I do not know nobody anyone. Sometimes I want to give up everything and just not exist at all. However Therefore, I start to think that it will come there will be better moments where times in the future when you will become the leader master of your life. In fact, try to work out one should solve your life's problems so that you can  for be proud of yourself. Some people say that when you are in your twenties [The way you wrote means in the 1920's until your later context refer's to one's age]the 20s are the golden ages, where when ["where" is for place, "when" is for time" everything is beautiful and you think you can eat the world is your oyster. However, I do not agree with that this because I am in my twenties but 20s, and I feel like I have 10 am a ten years old!