Antonilza Barros
The economy in Brazil Brazilians are going through a very critical time in the economy and other sectors such as education, environment and health. The situation is increasingly worrying because the population has lost all confidence in politicians, and especially the current president who was almost no reelected again. What remains hope for is a quick fix, because we are a country with great potential.
Feb 28, 2015 2:00 AM
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The economy in Brazil

Brazilians are going through a very critical time in the economy and other sectors such as education, environment and health. The situation is increasingly worrying because the population has lost all confidence in politicians, and especially the current president who was almost not re-elected again. What remains is hope for is a quick fix, because we are a country with great potential.

February 28, 2015
Very well written, almost like a native speaker would write. The 2 corrections are: "the current president who was almost no reelected again" while perfectly clear, would sound more native as "the current president who almost didn't get reelected"... reelected = implied "again". "What remains hope for is a quick fix" should be changed to "There is still hope for a quick fix" or "The only hope remaining is for a quick fix" just to sound native. Beside linguistics, don't you find it amusing that what you wrote would still sound current and applicable should "Brazilians" be replaced with "Americans", "Russians", "Chinese" or just about any other nationality?
February 28, 2015
there are many trouble as a developing country.for example china, although Chinese economy keeps rapid development and chinese family is more and more rich ,other aspects are missing.expecially morality and faith.
February 28, 2015
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