Dooriya
A Happy Day I feel so happy today.At first,it's snowing today,I like snow,because it is so beautiful! And then,I recieved a letter that I want to recieve all the time.Actually I almost want to give up,and thought it was hopeless.Because it had a long time since I sent letter to them.But the letter was sent to me today!How wonderful! I believe today must be a lovely and lucky day! Thanks.
Feb 28, 2015 3:12 AM
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A Happy Day

I feel so happy today. FIRSTLY, it's snowing today, I like THE snow,because it is so beautiful! And then, I recieved a letter that I want to recieve all the time. Actually I almost WANTED to give up and thought it was ALL hopeless. Because it HAS BEEN a long time since I sent letter to them. But the letter was sent to me today! How wonderful! I believe today must be a lovely and lucky day! Thanks.

 

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