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Today I woke up at 10am, well, actually my grandmother and the unbearable sun woke me, then she demanded that I tend to my bed. After that I went to the bathroom to brush my teeth and wash my face, after which I went to have breakfast with my mother, my sister and my grandmother. When I was eating my delicious eggs (with bacon), my grandmother began to bother me, because she didn't like my big and messy hair. So, we went to the bathroom and she washed my hair in the sink and combed me like a good proper <em>(Not certain what you mean here, is this the style of writing you are looking for? Or are you aiming for something more precise?)</em> boy. I'm very patient and polite with my grandmother because she is here for a short visit at my home, so I want to spend all my time with her.

In the afternoon, after having lunch, I went to my living room and started to read some books, which I bought with my sister yesterday. Later, my mother, my grandmother, and I saw a romantic film. I wanted an action film, but majority won. After the film I was a little groggy and tired, which is why I decided go to sleep. That's how my day ended.

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Today I woke up at 10am, well, actually my grandmother and the unbearable sun woke me up, then she forced me to tend my bed. After that I went to the bathroom to clean up my teeth and my face, next I went to have breakfast with my mother, my sister and my grandmother. When I was eating my delicious eggs with bacon, my grandmother began to bother me, because she didn't like my big and messy hair, so we went to the bathroom and she washed my hair in the sink and then combed me like a good boy. I'm very pacient and polite with my grandmother because she is here for a short visit at my home, so I want to spend all my time with her.

In the afternoon, after i had lunch, I went to my living room and started to read some books, which I bought with my sister yesterday. Later, my mother, my grandmother and I saw a romantic film, I wanted an action film, but mayority wins. After the film I was a little groggy and tired, that's why, I decided go to sleep and that's how my day ended.

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Today I woke up at 10am. Well, actually my grandmother and the unbearable sun woke me up. then, she forced me to tend (make?) my bed. After that, I went to the bathroom to brush my teeth and wash my face. next, I had breakfast with my mother, my sister and my grandmother. While I was eating my delicious eggs with bacon, my grandmother began to bother me because she didn't like my big and messy hair. So, we went to the bathroom and she washed my hair in the sink and then combed me like a good boy. I'm very patient and polite with my grandmother because she is here for a short visit. So, I want to spend all my time with her.

In the afternoon, after having lunch, I went to my living room and started to read some books, which I bought with my sister yesterday. Later, my mother, my grandmother and I saw a romantic film/movie. I wanted an action film/movie, but the majority wants to watch romance so, they win. After the film, I was a little groggy and tired. that's why, I decided to go to sleep and that's how my day ended.