Dooriya
A happy day I feel so happy today.At first,it's snowing today,I like snow,because it is so beautiful! And then,I recieved a letter that I want to recieve all the time.Actually I almost want to give up,and thought it was hopeless.Because it had a long time since I sent letter to them.But the letter was sent to me today!How wonderful! I believe today must be a lovely and lucky day! Thanks.
Feb 28, 2015 5:44 AM
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A happy day

I feel so happy today. First, it was snowing. I like snow because it is so beautiful. Then I received a letter that I have been waiting a long time to receive. Actually, I thought it was hopeless because it had been a long time since I sent the letter. I almost gave up, but the letter was sent to me today. How wonderful! I believe today must be a lovely and lucky day. 

 

February 28, 2015
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