I Want To Buy A Pet Rabbit I want to buy a pet rabbit because rabbits are cute. I want to sleep with her and feed her lettuce. Rabbits eat only vegetable, and I have heard it makes their organs clean.

Grace

I Want To Buy A Pet Rabbit I want to buy a pet rabbit because rabbits are cute. I want to sleep with her and feed her lettuce. Rabbits eat only vegetable, and I have heard it makes their organs clean. I do not want her to bother me when I study because I love studying as much as I love her. I want a white rabbit instead of a gray one. I do not dislike gray rabbits, but their color make me feel a little bit gloomy. When my dad reads a fairy tale to me at night next to my bed, I want my rabbit to be right next to me on my bed. We will be best friends.

Feb 28, 2015 1:24 PM

Corrections · 5

I Want To Buy A Pet Rabbit

I want to buy a pet rabbit because rabbits are cute. I want to sleep with her and feed her lettuce. Rabbits only eat vegetables, and I have heard it makes their organs clean. I do not want her to bother me when I study because I love studying as much as I love her. I want a white rabbit instead of a gray one. I do not dislike gray rabbits, but their color makes me feel a little bit gloomy. When my dad reads a fairy tale to me at night next to my bed, I want my rabbit to be right next to me on my bed. We will be best friends.

January 10, 2016

I honestly agree. x-) I'm not 100% sure if we're right, but I have read about the order of "only" in my grammar book. People would just put "only" before the verb because it sounds natural.

January 10, 2016

the adverb word order "eat only" is correct.

January 10, 2016

I Want To Buy A Pet Rabbit

I want to buy a pet rabbit because rabbits are cute. I want to sleep with her and feed her lettuce. Rabbits only eat* vegetables, and I have heard it makes their organs clean. I do not want her to bother me when I study because I love studying as much as I love her. I want a white rabbit instead of a gray one. I do not dislike gray rabbits, but their color make me feel a little bit gloomy. When my dad reads a fairy tale to me at night next to my bed, I want my rabbit to be right next to me on my bed. We will be best friends.

------------

*this is a very common problem for korean speakers. they always put "(verb) only". you should switch the two words to make it "only (verb)". that way it sounds much more natural and native.

Your english is very good. besides that one correction, everything else was great!

p.s. good choice, rabbits are super cute ^^

February 28, 2015

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!