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Brisbane North Stradbroke Island 1 I've been Stradborke island North Stradbroke Island is an Australian island in the state of Queensland, 30 km southeast of the capital Brisbane I take a big huge ferries yes very huge because the ferries accept a lot of cars and bus :D Someone said that is a iron boat?? Oh!!! and why i think that ferries is awesome? Because ferries is so comfortable Even i can't feel ferries moving And have a beer and vodka I can swear for god if i have enough money I'll soak up all the alcohol in the ferries :D I want get "hang over"before we even started trip :D haha The weather is very nice. I thought this day perfect weather for trip :D I thought so myself at first. before i meet squall :DDDDDDDDDDD damn it!
Feb 28, 2015 3:30 PM
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Brisbane North Stradbroke Island 1

I've been to Stradborke island
North Stradbroke Island is an Australian island in the state of Queensland,
30 km southeast of the capital Brisbane

I took a big/huge (choose either big or huge to describe the ferry) ferry (one boat = ferry, multiple = ferries if you took multiple then change "a" to many, a couple, several,etc.)
yes, very huge because the ferries accept a lot of cars and buses :D
Someone said that it is an iron boat??
Oh!!! and why i think that ferries is awesome?
Because the ferries are so comfortable
Even i can't feel the ferries moving
And have a beer and vodka
I can swear to god if i have enough money
I'll soak up all the alcohol in the ferries :D
I wanted to get a "hang over" before we even started the trip :D haha
The weather is very nice.
I thought this day was the perfect weather for trip :D
I thought so myself at first.
before i meet squall
:DDDDDDDDDDD

damn it!

 

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good job! the alcohol part was funny lol

 

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-make sure you keep the tense the same throughout the sentence (past/present/future)

-look out for singular/plural (ferry/ferries, is/are, etc.)

-watch for articles (a, the, an)

February 28, 2015
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